A very thorough review Wendy. I have very fond memories of reading Peter Rabbit to my children. The first sentence in your final paragraph could be written without the but at the beginning and joined to the second sentence.
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A very thorough review Wendy. I have very fond memories of reading Peter Rabbit to my children. The first sentence in your final paragraph could be written without the but at the beginning and joined to the second sentence.
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