Good day Wendy, I really like your story, I think your story is very interesting.I did a story that had lots of facts in it too, but I think your story is better than mine. I think you can add more information to your story.
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Good day Wendy, I really like your story, I think your story is very interesting.I did a story that had lots of facts in it too, but I think your story is better than mine. I think you can add more information to your story.
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